is something wrong with my tagboard?

hear the haunting words

lost children with no heart are crying

and you're the lost mother they're calling

go now,run and hide

i hear them cry at night

outside when the planets are falling

they want to feel and know you hear them

dark in their hearts

i can feel it burn inside of me

tormented young with no souls,haunting me

pain in their lives all they know is misery

take these chains away that are holding me down

i promised you,i still feel the same

but i wish you could do more,you dont even tell me

i dont know,but its discouraging,is ur plan working?

youre so much to me,youre my mood controller

i still do